kesso-w
23.05.2005, 11:07
I'm not good in English, but please read what I wrote!
I have to write a summary about Jack and the Beanstalk. (for a test)
And I hope somebody want to read what I wrote and correct me if something is false!
Jack and his mother were very poor. They had to sell their cow. Jack sold the cow for some beans. When he took the beans home, his mother was so angry that she threw them out the window.
The next morning there was a giant beanstalk that had grown up to the sky. Jack climbed up the beanstalk. He found a castle. The giant’s wife let Jack in and fed him some supper. When the giant came home, she hid Jack because her husband ate little boys. The giant ate his supper and then asked for his magic hen that laid golden eggs. When the giant fell asleep, Jack ran home with the hen. Jack and his mother became rich with the golden eggs from the magic hen.
Jack went back two more times. The first time he brought back a bag of gold coins.
The second time when he went to take the magic harp, the harp did not have appreciated to will be stolen, and called out to the giant for help. The giant chases Jack down the beanstalk, and the boy chopped it down with an axe, causing the giant to felt and died.
Jack and his mother lived happily ever after.
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Please don't be angry about my bad English..
PS: I had a bad mark at/on (I don't know)my first test...so I want to make the next better!
I have to write a summary about Jack and the Beanstalk. (for a test)
And I hope somebody want to read what I wrote and correct me if something is false!
Jack and his mother were very poor. They had to sell their cow. Jack sold the cow for some beans. When he took the beans home, his mother was so angry that she threw them out the window.
The next morning there was a giant beanstalk that had grown up to the sky. Jack climbed up the beanstalk. He found a castle. The giant’s wife let Jack in and fed him some supper. When the giant came home, she hid Jack because her husband ate little boys. The giant ate his supper and then asked for his magic hen that laid golden eggs. When the giant fell asleep, Jack ran home with the hen. Jack and his mother became rich with the golden eggs from the magic hen.
Jack went back two more times. The first time he brought back a bag of gold coins.
The second time when he went to take the magic harp, the harp did not have appreciated to will be stolen, and called out to the giant for help. The giant chases Jack down the beanstalk, and the boy chopped it down with an axe, causing the giant to felt and died.
Jack and his mother lived happily ever after.
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Please don't be angry about my bad English..
PS: I had a bad mark at/on (I don't know)my first test...so I want to make the next better!