now heres u a real poem

[Guest]

waitin on your love



I need you
I need a hug
Just once I would like to be loved
I want to feel whole
I want to feel secure
but that's impossible
when your not here
I don't know who you are
I don't know if I ever will
One day I hope we meet
so you can sweep me off my feet
I want to have that feeling
the one that everyone gets
when they know it's right
and they have no regrets
Will you ever be here with me?
not caring what other people believe
I hope so and
I hope so soon because
I'll be waiting....
waiting here for you
.................................................. .....................
This is to my best friend tony hoping one day he will be here

[Guest]

its really a nice poem... and you should only send it to a person that really deserves it.

[Guest]

Only stupidly which I hardly understand it...

[melina_s_]

Oh its very very nice did you write it yourself?

[thofi]

Are there more unrevealed poets in the beep community? Let us here more!

[-earthquake-]

24-01-2006 / 1:06 o'clock

I'm not hungry for food
I'm just hungry for LOVE
eating is just for extenting life
I don't need it...
my heart was shattered
my soul has been murdered
it had been impossible to rapair
you may have been able to restore it
I know you still love someone else
but you are still my best friend
the only one I trust and NEVER lie to
you were my only hold and hope for life
I know I've made mistakes and I'm very sorry
but I swear to you, I PROMISE you
I did NEVER lie to you and still would never do
if I lost you as my best friend
I will loose my life and starving to death
but I'll still CARE for you... whereever I will be



I wrote that tonight 'cauce I couldn't fall asleep, because of so many thoughts in my head... :rolleyes:

[deejay_blacklight]

I can understand why you wrote it, its really beautiful... when i cant sleep i write in my diary...

[Guest]

This is the way it's alway's been
Stuck in my mind time and again
Far be it for me, you wont catch me b*tchen
Bout' things locked inside I dont need to mention
It could be about this, it could be about that
I dont really care, I'm content where I'm at
I live all alone, I exsist when I have to
A zombie that wanders till days are through
Yes, solitary confinement living in one's mind
It works out quite nicely when problems arise
Stress does'nt come, you don't wish to die
Inside your mind you can run and hide
And nobody knows it but me,

This is the way its going to be
Stuck in my mind, always free
Far be it for me, I have nothing wrong
I run and hide and the inncident's gone
I never need people, they always need me
For whatever arises or the problem may be
What ever it is, you would think they can handle
Blown out of preportion like street gang vandles
I become a quick teacher to those who will learn
I am now the preacher to those of concern
A leader am I to those who will follow
A "shrink" shoving words to the ones who will swallow
Yes, solitary confinement livivnig in one's mind
It works out quite nicely when problems arise
Stress does'nt come, you don't wish to die
Inside your mind you can run and hide
And nobody knows it but me........................

Hey all, since I jusy joined up I figured I'd share too. Trying to get a site set up and bounced across this cool little forum, looking foward to getting to know ya better.........All the Best, Stormy

[Guest]

waitin on your love



I need you
I need a hug
Just once I would like to be loved
I want to feel whole
I want to feel secure
but that's impossible
when your not here
I don't know who you are
I don't know if I ever will
One day I hope we meet
so you can sweep me off my feet
I want to have that feeling
the one that everyone gets
when they know it's right
and they have no regrets
Will you ever be here with me?
not caring what other people believe
I hope so and
I hope so soon because
I'll be waiting....
waiting here for you
.................................................. .....................
This is to my best friend tony hoping one day he will be here
I absoulutely loved this............Do you have any more?

[Guest]

Are there more unrevealed poets in the beep community? Let us here more!
Boo!, LOL, Yea, I love to write....I'm Stormy and I have to say that you have a great little community going here and as much as I love to write, I love to read all others works too, Oops, the kiddos call, talk to you all soon. All the Best, Stormy

[thofi]

Boo!, LOL, Yea, I love to write....I'm Stormy and I have to say that you have a great little community going here and as much as I love to write, I love to read all others works too, Oops, the kiddos call, talk to you all soon. All the Best, Stormy

Looking forward to read more.

[-earthquake-]

Looking forward to read more.
you did'nt write yet, what you think about mine...:rolleyes:

[thofi]

Here is my poem. I used to sing it as a child. Now it´s a bit outdated :D

I love my mother
more than any other

[Guest]

Here is my poem. I used to sing it as a child. Now it´s a bit outdated :D

I love my mother
more than any other

lol,,, what do you mean with outdated?

[Guest]

24-01-2006 / 1:06 o'clock

I'm not hungry for food
I'm just hungry for LOVE
eating is just for extenting life
I don't need it...
my heart was shattered
my soul has been murdered
it had been impossible to rapair
you may have been able to restore it
I know you still love someone else
but you are still my best friend
the only one I trust and NEVER lie to
you were my only hold and hope for life
I know I've made mistakes and I'm very sorry
but I swear to you, I PROMISE you
I did NEVER lie to you and still would never do
if I lost you as my best friend
I will loose my life and starving to death
but I'll still CARE for you... whereever I will be



I wrote that tonight 'cauce I couldn't fall asleep, because of so many thoughts in my head... :rolleyes:

Wow, very deep EarthQuake, I really love ur style, u know how ur work just flows on, beautiful hon, just beautiful.......

[Guest]

Here is my poem. I used to sing it as a child. Now it´s a bit outdated :D

I love my mother
more than any other

Swwwwwwwweeeeeeet! LOL Got any more?

[-earthquake-]

Wow, very deep EarthQuake, I really love ur style, u know how ur work just flows on, beautiful hon, just beautiful.......
thank you very much.....

[Guest]

"What Could've Been"



It seemed impossible but, true
Not a thing in the world I could do
Something went wrong, and then you were gone
Oh still, today I miss you
You’re name, I wasn’t sure If you’d be a boy or a girl
Jessica was nice as was the name Mike
I was uncertain till I got the word
You could’ve been my wonder
You could’ve been my prayer
All the time I thing about you
But, you’re still not here
I found out, my little boy
You’ve made my whole world such a joy
I picked out your clothes
The ones you’d wear home
With a blanket and some of your toys
You would be five this year
And have a sister to protect from all fear
To play with, to run with, to grow and have fun with
And from your mother, the best love and care
You could’ve been my wonder
You could’ve been my son
I think of reasons why you left me
You know I can’t think of one
I realize now, that you’re safe
In this world with angels embrace
In time fills a space hence there forms the face
Of you mother when she leaves this race
You could’ve been my wonder
Still in my heart always be
That bright eyed little boy
That someday I’ll get to see

[thofi]

strmydz, that poem sounds familiar to me. Is it from a song book? It´s touchy.

[Guest]

Oh MG, NO I wrote this after I lost my first child in an aweful miscariage in 1989.............I do however have my own little tune to it and one of these days, I would love for it to be a song, see if you can find the one it reminds you of, I would love to see it.....................

[Guest]

A baby new
Left all alone
Without a place
To call a home
So many touched
This little one
So unfamiliar
No touch was warm
Just one kiss
With teary eyes
Baby never knew
That meant Good-bye
Women and men
Cared for the child
In and out again
Like a circus gone wild
Little child looked on
And tried to see
Is that the one?
Who’s going to care
for me?
A smile a frown
That quick indeed
Till a new touch
That said
“You can come home with me”
But,
For just two years………
Another kiss
The chilling cries
Of a two year old
Who forever knows “good-bye”
Women and men
Cared for the child
In and out again
The same circus gone so wild
Till there came a smile
Friendly to see
We’ll she spoke to me
And said
“You’re the one I need”
“I have looked so wide,
Near and far
I’ve just ‘bout given up
And here you are”
“Please”
“Come home to stay
Meet your family
Peter, Keith and Dale
Your new Daddy and me”
“Come home with us
You’re not alone
This is now your home”

[adriangjovalinluka]

[QUOTE=Guest]waitin on your love

Dear unknown friend of Beep,

I do not have so much sympathy for people who think that the heart is the mechanism of our feelings and when every piece of writings is dedicated to the heart. Maybe you are asking: WHY SO?

Because I think everything comes down to us by the BRAIN... I would like to suggest you to let the brain write your poems and and not just your hand.

Frankly, I do not like your stile of writing: it's really unprofessional.

[Guest]

Any one else have some more works?

[space vader3]

thats nice

[troublesome]

here they come
what you gonna do
feel so small they could step on you
call you up answer machine
when the human touch is what i need
what i need -is you

ok i didnt write it but its how i feel at 4 am

[BryannaRox]

That sucks here is a real poem


The day is gone,
I belong,
With someone,
I have good taste,
I have good hair,
I need someone,
to care







The End